Sunday, 12 October 2014

Week 2

. . .  I could not believe the smell . . .

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  1. I could not believe the smell....
    One evening my friends and I were watching a movie drinking lots of soda and 2 big portions of hot chipsfrom the Fish 'n' Chip shop down the road. After an hour and a half I had to go tothe toilet to do a number two, so off I went to the toilet. When I came out I forgot to flush the toilet, put the lid down and close the door. All my friends looked at me and said 'I can not believe the smell'.So all my friends got up and walked straight out the door and went home.

    By Rudi Penrose

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  2. I coud not belive the smell it was so bad my nose felt like it was going to menlt off. I was gasping fo fresh

    air I could taste it to. Then all of a sudden everything went black. I was woken up by water, then I looked

    around there were people In gas masks for a moment I thought I was a goner. I asked "where am I" all any one said wasn" you are safe with us". Then one of the men or women helped me up and said "there is

    a war and no one is safe".

    Tamati

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  3. I could not believe the smell, I followed the scent through the labyrinth, my sense of direction based purely on smell. As I went past each turn, the eroma got stronger. I could have sworn that at times the smell would change, one moment being burgers, then roast chicken and then....
    . BLUEBERRY PIE!!!
    I rounded yet another corner and the smell was overwhelming. I found myself standing In an open room, set with several tables. The room was without people, although the tables were burdened with masses of various foods.
    I licked my lips and exclaimed,
    'I can eat this!'

    josh

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  4. I was going for a walk with my cute little dog and we ran into a huge cave, inside was a huge pool of lava

    and sadly my dog jumped into it and DIED!! I spent like an hour crying my eyes out. Then I ran into what

    looked like a room with steam coming out of it, I thought it was a sauna so I ran into it and when I went I inside I COULD NOT BELIEVE THE SMELL, the place smelled worse than a sewer, I thought I was

    going to die.

    Sriya

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  5. Zeik-the last life

    I could not beleive the smell it was revolting. it is so bad my eyes start watering, I start to follow the stench. I want it to be gone, I find what was making the smell it was a dead racoon. I grab a pair of tonges and



    pick up the racoon by the tail, it started to move around all creepily so I followed it. Im on my own just me so I leave the racoon alone, when I get to my roomthe power goes off, its getting real creepy now. its all fun and games until now.

    Zeik

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  6. I couldn’t believe the smell that came from the goalkeepers pants when I broke his fingers with the 0soccer ball. I’ll tell you from the start, we were losing our match because of a tie but because they were on top of the ladder they would win. But then I made a mad break through their defence, shot at goal and heard a terrible crunching sound and smelt a horrific smell. I had broken the goalkeeper’s fingers and won the match. The goalie had six broken fingers and two fractured ones. That is a really big achievement in my eyes.

    Tom.

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  7. One after noon after school nugg and bacon came over to watch home and away it was like twenty past six and home and away was nilly over and I had to go to the toilet so I sprinted to the the toilet and did my business on the toilet than I rushed out to go and watch the rest of home and than "next week on home and away and I could not belive the smell I forgot to flush the toilet it it it smelt like rotton half rotton egg half bake beens and a fraction beef stew

    jayden

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  8. SOCCER
    As the game started everyone ran out to the centre of the field to shake hands. Then the kick and the game started. Dribbles, passes, flick tricks and intense shots at goal. Everyone was playing their best and hardest. Finally the ball was at my feet, I dodged, dived, dribbled and avoided everyone, I was in clear sights of the goal, and then disaster broke loose. A defender slide tackled me and fell in front and my face was guided into a place I cannot say. And I could not believe the smell. Then I fainted.


    AJ.

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  9. Friday night dad invited 2 people over to watch the football roosters vs cowboy's . When the Cowboys scored first dad farted I could not believe the smell it smellt licorice, chocolate and other sweets you could not believe it smellt like I was in heaven. 10 minutes later I fell asleep on dad lap. The roosters scored and scored again the score was 30 to 30 dad farted again, I woke up from the bad smell I checked and spluterd I ran to the door and fresh air came inside so I closed the door. By Caleb

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  10. Deakin shutter the fart boy

    Once apon a time there lived a little boy who loved to fart all the time he would fart anywhere but his class room he would get in big trouble by his teacher she would lock him in the class room all lunch and recess he do math sheets the whole time but one day he had to fart he could not hold it in he realeased it and he said i could not beileve the smell it smellt so bad the whole class fainted he ran out of school he watched the fart explode and spread all over the school the school was closed for a month to make shore it did not stink the whole school could not remember anything when he went back to school because there was a new kid who was just like him they became best friends one day they had a stink bomb fight and stank the whole school out the end

    By deakin

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  11. One day my friend and I had a movie night. This was really fun and cool, until, I farted.

    It made a big noise and I could not believe the smell. I think it was the baked beans I had for

    dinner, baked beans always make me fart. Then it happened again, this time it was worse

    it really stank. My friend asked me "can you smell that " I replied with "no", he new I was lying.

    I got up and opened the window , but the compost bin was out side and it was horrible.

    By Travis

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  12. One day there was a girl,her name was Laura. Shae live on a farm with her freind Megan,Montana, Madalyn and Shakira. One day Laura went for a ride on her motorbike and she ran into into a fallen tree and fell of and broke her arm, the bone was evan pokeing out, lucky she had a walky talky and she called Montana, and Montana went and got Laura and took her to the hospital. The doctor helped Lauraand they could not believe the smell of her arm so they cleaned it. The net day Montana picked up Laura and they want home.Afterabout 6 weeksshe went and got her cast of and her arm was all better.

    THE END

    Megan

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  13. I could not believe the smell it was amazing and also disgusting. It smelt like but more like poison .T walked in to a huge room 5 rows of tables full of food. The other end of the room da butcher came out of nowhere .I started to run then he yelled “ get over here “. I freaked out blinked ,went invsi and backstabbed with my butterfly and radiance I one hit dat butcher .I teleported back home and the butcher bought back teleported mid and run to my base and hooked me out of my fountain.

    Connor leese

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  14. I could not believe the smell of this sewage it burnt your eyes and was that bad I could taste it. “The mushy green/brown liquid it’s horrible I shouldn’t have applied for a job as a plumber Yuck”! Later on I’m going to the sewer to help fix some broken pipes that were making sewage come up out of sinks, taps you get the point anything to do with water, that poor rich family having a stinky house that smelled like sewage and that poor maid has to clean it up well I’m off to fix those pies bye journal.

    By Kai kliewer

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  15. I could not believe he smell, I believe that Laura kild a cow and Megan had a muntch on its leg for 25 minutes. Then Megan was ponky for 2 days later so then no one whanted to be her friendsfor 7i days couse she was ponky. So she went for a bath in cow poo to get the smell away but it was worse then it was before she bathed in cow poo. So she sead its time for me to go tho the bush for103 days so I am by myself. So I can just eat dear.

    THE END

    Montana

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  16. Some of our cow are wick so we have to take them to the meat works. We are doing it right now tomorrow we have to go to the meat works so today we are going were poting them on the truck now we are taking to the meat work there is heps of trucks small from having cows and bulls too. I cun"t not belive the small it relley sunk of all the daed cow werk relley senck. Im glad that you you don"t see them get card oh there is a horse can I pat the horse THE END

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  18. One day lived a girl named megan her parents lived in a pent house

    Her paerents decided to move to the country

    When they got out they couldn't believe the smell. Montana the

    Next door naber said'youll get youst to it' but they didn't

     it got worse megan called The movers the found a hotell

      for time being. The moving truck cant make it untill next

    Month. 'Ok we  found house  will take the stuff we need'

     now for the long  car drive home to the city they made it home

    The end by laura

     

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